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  在寫作一封個(gè)人陳述時(shí),一定要圍繞主題核心思想有條理的組織材料:例如文中,為什么選擇此專業(yè)?對(duì)此學(xué)科專業(yè)的熱愛和了解?如何學(xué)習(xí)此專業(yè)課程并為此付出多大的努力?是否將專業(yè)知識(shí)與實(shí)踐很好的結(jié)合?在課外活動(dòng)中具備什么樣的能力?是否做好準(zhǔn)備應(yīng)對(duì)未來挑戰(zhàn)?

  可以看出,作者有一條清晰的脈絡(luò),回答了這些問題,無非核心目的就只有一個(gè):表明自己具備在此專業(yè)進(jìn)一步深造和學(xué)習(xí)的能力!

Personal Statement

When Streaming Fire, my refinedly bound and printed magazine was finally changed into an influential school publication and even a recommended magazine for high school students in my province, I thought I would very likely end up as a freelance writer or a chief editor. However, juvenile expectancy for a career in literature was ever beyond the fast-changing fancy for knowing something new.
 ?。愂鰞簳r(shí)的理想,表明想超越樊籬,為下文的personal transformation做鋪墊)

I later chose accounting as my major at university and was admitted to the Accounting School of Beijing Technology and Business University. It is still hard now to identify my initiative motive for the choice of this major. Maybe it is just a juvenile peacockery, but I’d rather deem it as an endeavor to make up what I lacked at the early stage of my life: reasons, consecution and scientific attitude instead of too much passion and sentiments.
 ?。ù髮W(xué)所選專業(yè)為會(huì)計(jì),希望以理性、邏輯思維和科學(xué)態(tài)度彌補(bǔ)自己所缺乏的品質(zhì))

To be frank, I’d never imaged myself, a once poetic and sentimental teenage girl could finally fall in love with accounting, which was considered by a lot of people as a dull and trivial subject. I suppose I am nothing more special than other people. It is just the inbred strong will for getting to the first place that has pushed me along the way to delving into accounting. And it is gradually clear for me that accounting was not just a matter of calculating numbers, it is more a science very much related to every individual, small single business entities, and operation of complex corporations. Behind all the firms currently operated in the world, it is the science of finance and accounting that keeps them running well. So the subject is like veins of a creature, which bolster and provide for the development of the whole.
 ?。ò殡S學(xué)習(xí)的深入,表明對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)專業(yè)的熱愛以及由此所產(chǎn)生的對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)的深刻認(rèn)識(shí),會(huì)計(jì)于市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)浪潮中的個(gè)體、商業(yè)實(shí)體以及大公司的系統(tǒng)運(yùn)營具有重要的意義和價(jià)值)

When I finally come out with this idea, my study of accounting was changed into a voluntary and active process combined with interests instead of the simple struggle for making up what I lacked in my character. Indeed, as I go deeper into it, I derived more interest from the subject. Case study in economic activities especially drew my great attention and kindled my curiosity. As a result, I spent quite a lot of time in reading academic journals, referring to Internet resources and then was even motivated to doing financial analysis myself. My dissertation on capital structure, which was completed under the direction of a prestigious professor of the school, engrossed both my keen interest in the topic and my tremendous effort in making researches. I almost exhausted all the sources possible including English publications, convincing facts in the Internet and relevant regulations of commercial and taxation law. It took me further several months to discuss it with my instructor and to make modifications……This competition further promoted my enthusiasm in studying accounting and I realized the study of the subject involves valuable in-depth research as well as absorption and grasp of theoretic knowledge. Later I was sent as one of the four representatives of our school to attend an inter-college seminar. My speech on the subject attracted and impressed a lot of attendees.

  (說明學(xué)習(xí)成為自覺主動(dòng)的過程,通過描述論文寫作及參賽過程認(rèn)識(shí)到,會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)需要將對(duì)理論知識(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)和掌握與深度研磨相結(jié)合,實(shí)際上向加校方表明自己所擁有的研究潛質(zhì)和能力。)

At the beginning of this year, I went to my internship practice at the Accounting Department of Shanxi Power Transmission Project Corporation. It was a time when I finally got to the down-to-earth work in accounting. I worked as a cashier there and was dealing with receipt voucher and payment voucher everyday. I also worked on cash receipt and payment journals, bank deposit of the company and income taxation report. I’d say this is a very crucial period for me as the pure theories I acquired at school finally hard landed in realistic work. My internship work was indeed simple and basic. But it was also overloaded with details. It influenced the overall flow of the financial work. The general ledger and other financial statements were based on the original certificates I made as a cashier. I’ve tried my best to be careful, hardworking and highly responsible. Three months later when my internship ended, I was the most effective staff in my department and most important of all, I felt my previous study at school was validated and strengthened. It is worth to mention my skills in computer accounting, which had helped a lot in improving work efficiency of the whole department.
 ?。愂鲈诠镜膶?shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn),表明通過實(shí)踐加深理論知識(shí)的應(yīng)用能力)

Despite all my endeavors in studying my major, I found myself still enamored with the joys derived from helping and communicating with others. I became the president of English Association of my school and later helped develop it into the most influential community with over 300 members in the school. I sought cooperations with a broadcasting station, some popular local newspapers and a publishing company and organized a series of such significant activities as English Corner, Free Access to English Films and Comprehensive English Skills Competition for the students. My experience as a community leader taught me the skills to communicate and organize, the ability to understand differences and the persistence required in the struggle for success.
  (關(guān)于在學(xué)習(xí)之外的課外學(xué)生會(huì)活動(dòng),表明自己的組織能力、表達(dá)能力、領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力等綜合素質(zhì))

Again making evaluation of my past, I feel much contented with what I’ve been engaged in. I remember Frost once sighed for the differences one made upon choosing diverged roads. But I’d rather say that every road one takes may unfold the same amazing scenes as long as he knows to appreciate life. I’ve seen my future career posed in the fields of accounting and finance. While I have no doubt your post graduate program will push me to my limits, I am confident that I can face the rigorous challenges of it and thrive on the road I’ve decided to take(表明自己的信息,已做好準(zhǔn)備應(yīng)對(duì)未來的挑戰(zhàn)。)

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